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(@rocker4life)
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sup everyone
well i was feelin kinda mad and upset and sad when i wrote this
some chick i like got dumped by her dude for the second time
and well i like her but he got back wit her and well its gonna happen again
well anywho im lookin for a name for this song and maybe some chord opinions for the music and anyother opinions are welcomed

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Verse 1

Why wont you see,
That he'll never treat you
The way you should be,
I've been there for you
When he wasn't there
But you still can't see
That I care….

Chorus
He hurt you once
He did it again
But after all that
You still forgave him
He hurt once more
Just like before
But still you
Went back to more…

Verse 2
When ever you're down
You come to me first
I bring you back up
When you're at your worst
When he broke your heart
I was always there
To put it back together
And to show that I cared
But still you cant see….

Chorus
He hurt you once
He did it again
But after all that
You still forgave him
He hurt once more
Just like before
But still you
Went back to more…

Verse 3

I guess I should stop
And just let you be
With him
And not me,
Ill be there for you
Till the end
Till the day you finally
See..
How I fell about you and me……

Chorus(2x)
He hurt you once
He did it again
But after all that
You still forgave him
He hurt once more
Just like before
But still you
Went back to more…

thanks

"We play it the way the air is in America today. The air is slightly
static isn't it ? You know what I mean ? " -Jimi


   
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(@taver)
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Well looking at a line from your chorus, 'Just like before' seems like a suitable name for the song.

One day !!
http://www.soundclick.com/taver
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RQhXgRKobGI


   
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