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Flyguy (o)===# :)
Hiya,
Well, I would suggest that it's not actually finished. If I summarise what's there, it reads
I've got something to tell you
You don't want me to go
I'm gone
We're both upset.
Now, to load up on the misery in full, I think we need to be told what's to be told and why, in a few more verses.
Best,
A :-)
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flyguy,
I agree with Alan, it doesn't feel complete as it stands at the moment. Looking good though.
Also, what are these 3 lines after the chorus, is it the middle section???
I'm sorry I had to be blunt
But at least I was honest
I always tried to keep my story straight
Cheers.
