Hi all this is a Sunday Song writters group song I wrote ,
It's a lovey dovey love song , D.Hodge re-wrote verse 4 for me and I think it's pretty good .
There is a link where on the bottom if you wish to listen to it but be warned I am no singer ....
Making Noise
V/1
Sunday morning , there we are
Laying in each others arms
I kiss your soft silky face
Its Sunday no need to race
V/2
Sleeping in till about noon
Cuddles , and kisses in mid June
Holding you close to me
Your beautiful , every man can see
CHORUS
I know I am in love when
you put your hands on my shoulders
I put my hands upon your waist
I feel your soft tender lips
Kissing my scruffy , stubble face
V/3
The warmness of your body
Warms my soul , keeps me alive
Running my fingers through your hair
For loving you is all I care
V/4 (Stolen From D.Hodge )
Loud neighbours making noise
Going places mowing lawns
Let me gently close the widow
We'll make some noise of our own
CHORUS
I know I am in love when
you put your hands on my shoulders
I put my hands upon your waist
I feel your soft tender lips
Kissing my scruffy , stubble face
Outro
I love you
I honestly deeply love you
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All comments appreciated
Hilch :?: :?:
Here is to you as good as you are
And here is to me as bad as I am
As good as you are and as bad as I am
I'm as good as you are as bad as I am
Hey mate
This is really good , I'm not too sure about the scruffy stubble face ( something I don't want to kiss ) lol
Your recording isn't too bad either ..
Keep up the good work with the guitar you have improved so much since I last heard you
L.k
Aghhhh
Not only am I a senior citizen
I'm now a bloody senior member
Are you people trying to tell me I'm old or what ?
over 700 posts ( I really do need to get out more )
thanks old boy :lol: :lol: :lol:
seriosly thanks for the nice words
Here is to you as good as you are
And here is to me as bad as I am
As good as you are and as bad as I am
I'm as good as you are as bad as I am
