First song i've written for while, you know that that thing called life getting in the way. Well something called work which i wish wasnt part of my life!
with your cheeky grin
no one can resist your charm
they all adore you
time will pass so fast
make sure you have lots of fun
while you are still young
Your so full of life
so full you resist your sleep
in case its all gone
when you wake up
dont you fear my son
your life only just begun
as you start to grow up
never disrespect your mum
she'll always love you
dont you forget my son
we'll always be here for you
in good or bad times
Your so full of life
so full you resist your sleep
in case its all gone
when you wake up
dont you fear my son
your life only just begun
Hey, just read your song post, didnt see it before! :)
I like it, although its quite short, perhaps another verse and an outro might help to flesh it out a bit? It does work fine as it is though.
Any ideas for music/chords/riffs to go with it?
Pete
Hey! I really like it. I think its fine how long it is.
Sorry i took so long to reply, glad it's liked. Yes i have chords and melody for it, just need to find time to record it. I think a lot of my songs come out short, it's gets so far then it seems i have force it too much to make more verses work.
Finally had time to record some songs and My Son is one of them, http://www.soundclick.com/taver
