Skip to content
New song from me-Ho...
 
Notifications
Clear all

New song from me-Hollywood Suicide

4 Posts
3 Users
0 Likes
1,300 Views
(@sgincyqx)
Honorable Member
Joined: 17 years ago
Posts: 404
Topic starter  

Hollywood Suicide

She's living with her parents,
Over on the wrong side
Gets home and lights up,
She can't help her hard times

The world is killing itself tonight,
Hollywood suicide
Track marks and we see the light,
Hollywood suicide

He's been at his Mom's place
Since he shot his wife
Says watching her squirm
Was the best time of his life

The world is killing itself tonight,
Hollywood suicide
Track marks and we see the light,
Hollywood suicide

{solo here}

She sits and watches a flame,
As it flickers and dies
The best friend you could want,
It hurts to see her cry

The world is killing itself tonight,
Hollywood Suicide
Track marks and we see the light
Hollywood suicide

The world is killing itself tonight,
Hollywood suicide
Track marks and we see the light,
Hollywood suicide

Lyrics are pretty well solidified unless they don't fit with the music I have yet to write. Modern punk-rock sound, ~120-ish BPM.

Ewan McGregor: I said, "Eve, I want you to look after my wedding ring while I'm away," and she started to cry and I said, "Eve. Eve, I can't wear my ring or I won't get laid on the trip!"


   
Quote
(@scrybe)
Famed Member
Joined: 17 years ago
Posts: 2241
 

yeah man, this is a kewl tune - I can hear the riffage in my head while I'm reading it, always a good sign. you mentioned doing it as a punk song, but I think it'd work equally well with more of a Stones-mid-sixties kinda vibe, or modern Strokes but with more swagger. I reckon it'd work either way, though. you plannin on recording some music for it?

just one word of caution though - I really wouldn't introduce this in a gigging stiuation by dedicating to Heath Ledger or BRad Renfro. Not unless you harbour the strange desire to be lynched, anyway. :wink:

good work! :D

Ra Er Ga.

Ninjazz have SuperChops.

http://www.blipfoto.com/Scrybe


   
ReplyQuote
(@sgincyqx)
Honorable Member
Joined: 17 years ago
Posts: 404
Topic starter  

Thanks!

I'll record it this weekend, hopefully. Getting co operation out of drummers and bassists is not easy :wink:

Ewan McGregor: I said, "Eve, I want you to look after my wedding ring while I'm away," and she started to cry and I said, "Eve. Eve, I can't wear my ring or I won't get laid on the trip!"


   
ReplyQuote
(@showstopper508)
Active Member
Joined: 16 years ago
Posts: 7
 

Great lyrics man,I can definitely feel the punk vibe.


   
ReplyQuote