I needed one last song for my album...I threw this together pretty quickly...tell me what you think and where to revise.
Verse
I have to tell you
I'm thinking about you
And I'll show you
All that I am
For now this is new love
But I wonder if my love
Could ever be
Part of your plan
Wispered secrets
Words off of your lips
Could send me so high
I'd never come down
I think of heaven
Then all that you've given
If I had my choice
I'd stay here on the ground
Chorus
Do you need me, like I need you
Like I want, to be needed
Do you see me, like I see you
I'll not leave this, uncompleted
Verse 2
For so long now
You've shown me how
In so many ways
To breath you in
Intoxicating
So liberating
This feels so good
It must be a sin
Everything I feel
Has never felt so real
I was blind for so long
But you made me see
It's never been so clear
Can't breath without you near
A life without you
Is no life for me
Repeat Chorus
Tell me what you think
really great song, simple but effective, i like the rhyming and it flows well!
hi
here is a thought if you edit this and use it as your bridge :
Intoxicating
So liberating
This feels so good
It must be a sin
Intoxicating
So liberating
Intoxicating
So liberating
just a thought
cheers
Aghhhh
Not only am I a senior citizen
I'm now a bloody senior member
Are you people trying to tell me I'm old or what ?
over 700 posts ( I really do need to get out more )
That's not a bad idea...I'll see if I can work it out with the music....thanks