Skip to content
Notifications
Clear all

"perfect stepping stone"

3 Posts
2 Users
0 Likes
483 Views
(@straycat)
Noble Member
Joined: 20 years ago
Posts: 1282
Topic starter  

perfect stepping stone

staring at the venomous screen applying for the mirror's position
dealing with them far too long, them replies never arrive

and then there comes the moment, tip-toe approach
when I finally know I haven't changed that much
oh, I've probably not changed at all

still less than consistent as my mind races on
though I'd prefer acting over being acted upon

sitting cross-legged in the middle of the circle I drew around myself
thinking about how Conor said: “a line allows progress”

and then there comes the moment, tip-toe approach
when I have to go search the garbage for arguments
that may allow me to advance

oh, I'd prefer acting over being acted upon
but it just seems like I'm the perfect steppin' stone.

haven't posted here in a while, but wanted to share this. comments always appreciated;)
cheers,
bluenightangel

p.s. there's a song by conor oberst(band: bright eyes) called "a line allows progress, a circle does not".

"oh, eventually it will break your heart" - anders wendin


   
Quote
(@poeticsmile)
Estimable Member
Joined: 19 years ago
Posts: 81
 

I can't believe no one has replied to this. I think it is wonderful. I can see everything in my head very vividly. At first I thought I was going to be confused to high hell but quite not. Very good job. Wish I could give you some criticism but I can't really find any. Again good job.


   
ReplyQuote
(@straycat)
Noble Member
Joined: 20 years ago
Posts: 1282
Topic starter  

thank you very much :D

cheers,
bluenightangel

"oh, eventually it will break your heart" - anders wendin


   
ReplyQuote