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(@snoogans775)
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well, maybe I'm just a melancholy kid, but I've got no choice but to write another sad one.

Verse 1
there something pounding hard
just on the edge of your brow
and the grass is soft as angel wings
but your face pulls your body back down

Verse 2
all you see is a city
in a thick, sandy fog
and the people stop laughing when they see your face
so run away

Chorus
and it's never gonna be ok
if you might feel like this again
because all the love you've had
could never survive this rain

Verse 3
it burns your skin, it burns your bones
it burns you through in your sleep
and it rains on you through every dream
you can see it when you awake

Chorus

Verse 4
it rains down to your teeth
and the spider crawls up your throat
but the itsy bitsy man that you once were
is losing all his hope

Outro
and I hear there's a place past heaven
where i can finally sleep
but if there is any chance of judgement
I suppose I'll live a good life

I'll write a good pop song one of these days, but today is definetely not that day...

I don't follow my dreams, I just ask em' where they're going and catch up with them later.
-Mitch Hedburg
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(@gaz-uk)
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doesnt do anything for me man.....sorry

"people laugh at me because im different...i pity you..because your all the same"


   
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(@nitetrapper)
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Hi Mitch, Sorry but i had a hard time following this one. There's alot of words compressed in the song. But I cant see what they come back to. Maybe its just me. Anyway keep writing Nite..................

lyrics belong in songs, poems bolong in bookstores


   
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