SLIGHT REWRITE Waiting For You
I stepped across the strangest land
Coz my childish dreams didn't go to plan
Please don't feel so left behind so soon
I guess a part of me will always be waiting for you
The lights went out in a pitch black house
You say they only spark up when your around
Please don't feel as if we are the dying two
I guess a part of me will always be waiting for you
And sometimes
I feel you getting closer
There's something in the air
I know its too late
But I feel you still inside me
And I know your always there
I look for you amongst the crowd of fools
Your still hoping that they notice it too
Please don't feel like this pain is long overdue
I guess a part of me will always be waiting for you
So you stay awake almost every night
And say that sleep is only for the happy and bright
Please don't feel that this is always the truth
I guess a part of me will always be waiting for you
And sometimes
I feel you getting closer
Theres something in the air
I know its too late
But I feel you still inside me
And I know your always there
And sometimes
I feel you getting closer
You left your spirit behind so soon
I guess a part of me will always be waiting for you
I really enjoyed reading this one. Nice! I like the way you describe it all, I love the words you used. :D
Just find it a little hard to understand what exactly it is about...
You'll never get to heaven if you're scared of getting high!
i did a little rewrite on this one and also wanted to answer your question about what it was about...its about moving forward with your life which means leaving someone you love a little left out and behind but its something you have to do.its like thier stuck in your past, a place you dont want to go back to but you still love them
