V1:
I was always killing time
Wasting words
Wasting tears
I was always held in line
Losing faith
Losing ground
It's over now
My life will never be the same
I've had enough
Time to get back in the game
Chorus:
You can't hold me down any longer
It's been more than long enough
Can't stop me now I'm getting stronger
I have taken more than enough
I am through with you
And all of your lies
It's over now
I'm leaving it all behind
V2:
I was always there for you
Catching your fall
Whenever you'd call
I was always your number two
Hurting inside
Paying the price
It's over now
My life will never be the same
I've had enough
Time to get back in the game
Chorus:
You can't hold me down any longer
It's been more than long enough
Can't stop me now I'm getting stronger
I have taken more than enough
I'm through with you
And all of your lies
It's all over now
I'm leaving it all behind
It took me some time
Been doing some thinking
But now I've reached the end of the line
And I guess now it's time to do some living
Chorus:
You can't hold me down any longer
It's been more than long enough
Can't stop me now I'm getting stronger
I have taken more than enough
I'm through with you
And all of your lies
It's all over now
I'm leaving it all behind
You'll never get to heaven if you're scared of getting high!
excellent, i really enjoyed this song! it has a clear message but the lyrics are still interesting! well done!
have to agree with guitargeek on this
really goood
cheers
L.K
Aghhhh
Not only am I a senior citizen
I'm now a bloody senior member
Are you people trying to tell me I'm old or what ?
over 700 posts ( I really do need to get out more )
This song is really good but I think there are some places you could try and take out one or two syllables.
Special K
Once again: thanks for all the lovely comments!
But it surprises me how nice everyone is here on guitarnoise... It's a good thing but on other forums the story's a bit different at times :-)
You'll never get to heaven if you're scared of getting high!
hey there
I only write the truth here and if something does not seem to work for me trust me I will say so and also offer a another choice of wording or such .
you seem to have a gift
keep up the good work
cheers
L.K :arrow:
Aghhhh
Not only am I a senior citizen
I'm now a bloody senior member
Are you people trying to tell me I'm old or what ?
over 700 posts ( I really do need to get out more )
by no means is this bad.. but i think it's on the "nothing new" side. even the enough to enough ryhme.. (or do the same two words ryhme?) doesn't bother me. but i think you're giving the general idea rather than the sexxxy details.
example.. you say you were always catching his fall. that's a common phrase. make it your own. what did you do to catch his fall? or maybe word it in a way that isn't common.
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i give this song 10! awesome!!! :D
