rewrite YOU ARE THE QUEEN

well i gave it another go and would like some feed back on the rewrite i didnt change a whole lot but i hope it seems more complete

thanks :wink: mystic

(classic rock)

You are the Queen

Your legs are so long
You're a tall ,tall blond
You could go any were
an do what you want
You look in the mirror
But you don't see
You think your ordanary

ch
There's something about the way you smile
And the way you move drives me wild
But you don't know ..no you don't know
(Small music break)
You don't know my deepest desires
And if ya did would ya ..cure my fire

You are the Queen an you can wear the crown
Why do you always put your self down
Your eyes are so bright they could capture the moon
OH ..Why do you stay in your bed till noon…….

ch
There's something about the way you smile
And the way you move drives me wild
But you don't know ..you don't know
(Small music break)
You don't know my deepest desires
And if ya did would ya ..cure my fire

You don't know your so beautiful
Your legs are so long
You're a tall ,tall blond
You could go any were
an do what you want
You look in the mirror
But you don't see
You think your ordinary

ch
There's something about the way you smile
And the way you move drives me wild
But you don't know ..you don't know
(Small music break)
You don't know my deepest desires
And if ya did would ya ..cure my fire
no you don't know…No you don't know

© DJ.ALARIC 2007