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Roses and Riffs

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(@havok95)
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Joined: 19 years ago
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This isn't my first song, but I think it's my best so far. I've been writing songs for about 6 months, despite my total lack of musical ability. Oh well, enjoy (feedback very much appreicated).

I can sense you all around
I can see you in the sky
I can hear you underground
I can feel you as you cry

You could have yourself a smoke
In a life without a light
You can tell yourself a joke
On this cold and lonely night

CHORUS
Emotion running through my fingertips
Emotion I left on your crimson lips
I want to leave you with a final gift
I'm pricked by thorns of Roses and Riffs
I want to leave you with a final gift
I'm pricked by thorns of Roses and Riffs

All the Cats throw up their paws
And you put your hand in mine
They just give one hand applause
But the claws will show in time

(REPEAT CHORUS)

BRIDGE
There's blood on my hands, I'm tattered and torn
Didn't understand, got pricked by the thorns
My love's in black and red, I gave my greatest gift
My love's at home in bed... (my love's at home in bed)

(REPEAT CHORUS)

Pricked by the throns of Roses and Riffs
Pricked by the thorns (Roses and Riffs)
Roses and Riffs (Roses and Riffs)
Roses and Riffs

And your claws will show in time...


   
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(@mezlay)
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Joined: 19 years ago
Posts: 37
 

wow I really liked it. I sure hope i'm thinking of the right meaning but in terms of writing it was good. Join me in the lack of musical ability but so much fun to write. Enjoyed reading it keep it up!


   
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(@guerillacharlie)
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Joined: 19 years ago
Posts: 29
 

Good song, put together nicely. Just get some muic together and put the lyrics to it. the first 4 lines i liked when you were saying seeing hearing and feeling. You propably have more potential in music then you seem to think nobody has "no" musical ability.

:wink:


   
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