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School composition :S! help me please!!

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(@7cookka)
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Untitled ( for the moment )

Em, C, G, D x2

Verse 1
Em C G D
U say, that everything is gonna be ok,
Em C G D
U smile, stay, hold my hand for a while,
Em D Em D C
If I could c, that u and I were meant to be,
Em D Em D G
Would you stay near and kiss my lips sweetly,

Chorus
G D
And I don't wanna c u cry,
G D
I just wanna show you why,
D Em
To stay right by my side,
G D
And if u don't agree,
D Em
I'll show you how to see,
G D
That sometimes life ain't fine,
Em
As long as you are mine…

Em, C, G, D x2

Verse 2

Em C G D
I breathe, slowly in and out to be,
Em C G D
Unique, I stay hold my hands and pray,
Em D Em D C
That you, and me, cold find a way to see,
Em D Em D G
That time will fly, just like a bird up high,

Chorus x 2

Em, C, G, D x2……….to fade

just your thoughts would be appreciated, thanks, kat :)

*~*kitty*~*


   
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(@7cookka)
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hey all, i was just wondering what you thought of this song as it is my current school composition and wanted to make sure i would be garenteed a good mark! its not very good, as i am just teaching myself guittar but i found this chord progression and wondered what you thought?? please be brutal! oh and any thoughts on the lyrics? im not a lyricist and wasnt sure the chorus made any sence.. thanks all, kat

*~*kitty*~*


   
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