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(@pierson)
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Still Here

And this is why I
Wait for you.
Don't know why but I know that I gotta
Wait for you.
You probably don't even want me to
Wait for you.
This could be my last hour and I won't waste it waiting for you.

Because I know that you're not there waiting for me.
Maybe I'm just a little paranoid.
I don't know why I love to watch the hate.
But all-in-all, I'm still here waiting for you.
Maybe it's because I can't stop thinking of you.
Even when you toy with me!
Maybe it's because I still feel for you.
This will never fade, and this is why I.....

Wait for you.
Don't know why but I know that I gotta
Wait for you.
You probably don't even want me to
Wait for you.
This could be my last hour and I won't waste it waiting for you.

I don't want to waste anymore time on you.
You're not gonna see me anymore.
I want to forget all about you.
But I can't bring myself to lock the door.
Your spell still hasn't faded on me.
I still desire you, and this is why I.....

Wait for you.
Don't know why but I know that I gotta
Wait for you.
You probably don't even want me to
Wait for you.
This could be my last hour and I won't waste it waiting for you.

I know that I'm wasting my time.
You know that you're wasting my time.
My days are now mine and that's the way it should be.
My days are mine and that's the way it ought to be.
I will no longer.....

Wait for you. (no more!)
Don't know why but I know that I gotta
Wait for you. (not any more!)
You probably don't even want me to
Wait for you. (no more!)
This could be my last hour and I won't waste it waiting for you.

There's a thin fine line between hate and rage.
Now watch the line be crossed and break!


   
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(@7cookka)
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hey pierson,
i really liked your lyrics, but was wondering if you had yet composed a tune to follow?? i was thinking maybe the chords Em, C, G, D would suit it..but its just an idea....if u didn't already have a tune..
i look forward to seeing the melody line if u decide to post it,
thanks, kat :)

*~*kitty*~*


   
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(@pierson)
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I have a guitar and I am currently teaching myself (but I still suck) and I dont know chords that well. I have the music in my head, though (if it matters. :) )

There's a thin fine line between hate and rage.
Now watch the line be crossed and break!


   
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(@7cookka)
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lol omg im so happy to hear ur teaching urself aswell!! lol i just started teaching myself last week, i checked out a book on teaching guitar and those are only a few of the chords i have learnt..but i have found it is a good ( and really easy) chord progression for beginners.
keep up the good work :)
kat

*~*kitty*~*


   
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(@pierson)
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LOL we begginers have to stick together!

There's a thin fine line between hate and rage.
Now watch the line be crossed and break!


   
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(@dillydally)
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Congrats on teaching yourself to play guitar, that's what I did... trust me it takes a while to play anything decent.

"Because I know that you're not there waiting for me.
Maybe I'm just a little paranoid. "

I found that these two lines just clashed, don't know what it was for me but they just stood out as I was looking over song.
I'm not going to suggest anything to change because it's your song and I honestly can't pinpoint what was just wrong in my head.

It's 15 Till And She Has The Other 45 In Her Mouth.


   
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(@nolongerme)
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Hey great lyrics!


   
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(@alangreen)
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I can hear it as a rap

Best,

A :-)

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(@pierson)
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It's not rap, but it is a fast pace rythem. Some lines Go slower and most go fast. This is why those lines must have looked different.

Thanks for enjoying the lyrics, jamesgrubb!

There's a thin fine line between hate and rage.
Now watch the line be crossed and break!


   
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