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(@x_gyllenhaalic_x)
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-v1-
If someone falls alone,
Can you hear them?
If someone cries,
Can they make a gem?

An old lady dies,
yet no one cries.
What happened to the world?
How fast has it twirled?

-c-
I'm silently screaming
(No matter how hard she tries it)
We're silently screaming
(No matter how hard we try it)
They're silenty screaming
(No matter how hard they try it)
Everyone's silently screaming
(And no one hears)

-v2-
What happened to the law,
and happened to love?
What happened to the 10 commandments?
What happened to the rules for all of the above?

Sleep on your lies,
Listen to everyone's sighs.
Can you solve their prayer.
Good luck, take care.

-c-

-b (v3)-
No matter what I do,
No matter what we do,
No matter what they do,
No one can save us all.
No matter what I say,
No matter what we say,
No matter what they say,
No one can make us fall.

-c-

I'm silently screaming.
I'm silently dreaming.
I'm silently crying.
I'm silently dying.

Jake Gyllenhaal/my oh my/your so cute/you make me sigh! I <3 JAKE!


   
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(@onegirlrevolution)
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i see you havent gotten any responses, so, I, being the nice person i am, will respond.
I don't have much experience with songwriting, but I like it. It seems to have a good point to it. It struck me probably more than any other person, because thats how i feel.
So i like it a lot.
(As if this was a good reply!)

"i wish the world was made of chocolate"
[--Tyler Burkum--]

She's calling out to You, this is a call; this is a call out... [--Thousand Foot Krutch--]


   
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(@x_gyllenhaalic_x)
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I appriciate your reply. Heh, any reply is better than none at all!

Jake Gyllenhaal/my oh my/your so cute/you make me sigh! I <3 JAKE!


   
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(@brewer_23)
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yeah this song is pretty kool i like the last bit the most

I'm silently screaming.
I'm silently dreaming.
I'm silently crying.
I'm silently dying.

it would work well as a interlude before a build up to the last chorus or something well anyway well done :)


   
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