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some lyrics lemme know what you think

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(@dneck)
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No name or music for this yet. Ill get around to it eventually, im thinkin a repative pattern for the verses and then some kinda intresting riff between.

Whats your favorite color?
I think that mine is blue.
The oceans skies and most of all your eyes,
Color between my lines with you.

Do you think that maybe,
We all really love blue?
But the way I see colors,
Is different than you?

(I think this is the worse verse, might cut it altogether)
So you might call it green,
But you feel the same inside.
The color fills the void,
Everytime you close your eyes.

Its that feeling inside,
Not the colors that you see.
That makes like worth living,
And it beautiful to be.

(and this is the best one by far)
So don't paint a white picture,
If your souls dripping black.
And don't join the play,
If you can't learn to act.

But most of all be honest,
Cause as scary as it seems.
Your the only one who has to walk
Through your gallery of painted dreams.

"And above all, respond to all questions regarding a given song's tonal orientation in the following manner: Hell, it don't matter just kick it off!"
-Chris Thile


   
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(@ghost)
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Seems your song so is about comparing life to how people can view the same painting differently. Nice concept to be using in a song. I was thinking that since you used 'cool' colours like blue and green you could write around 'warm' colours like orange or yellow maybe.

(I think this is the worse verse, might cut it altogether)
So you might call it green,
But you feel the same inside.
The color fills the void,
Everytime you close your eyes.

Maybe when you come up with adding other verses(if you do), you'll think of something you like better with green.

:D

"If I had a time machine, I'd go back and tell me to practise that bloody guitar!" -Vic Lewis

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