Do I go into how much they loved their significant other? Or how glad they are that its over?
GUESS I DIDNT DO ENOUGH
I SHOULD'VE PUT MORE HOURS IN THE DAY
MAYBE THEN YOU WOULDN'T OF WALKED AWAY
I WASN'T THERE FOR YOU?
WHO DRIED YOUR EYES AND HELD YOUR HAND THROUGH THE
NIGHT OH BABY YOU DONT UNDERSTAND
I WAS HURTIN SO DEEP
I HATED LIFE WHO I WAS
WANTED YOU BACK
I LOVED YOU SO-O MUCH
(CHORUS)
HAD I JUST FORGOTTEN WHO I WAS
WHO I WANTED TO BE
WOULD YOU BE SITTIN HERE BESIDE ME
IF I REVOLVED MY WORLD AROUND YOU
WOULD YOU STILL BE HOLDING ONTO
WHO I FORGOT TO BE?
You cannot live a perfect day without doing something for someone who will never be able to repay you.
Life is not about what I've done, what I should've done, what I could've done. Its about what I can do and what I will do.
Not a bad start, I like what you have for the most part. Little tweaking of lines here and there........
WOULD YOU STILL BE HOLDING ONTO
WHO I FORGOT TO BE?
I LOVE that line! That line says SO much! :D
I'd like to hear/see the final draft.
Mike
Hi AerynK.McAvan
This is a very good start ... am very interested in your final draft of this ..
You might say I'm being picky but Caps means your yelling , I'm pretty sure this is supposed to be screamed ...
keep up the writting
L.K
Aghhhh
Not only am I a senior citizen
I'm now a bloody senior member
Are you people trying to tell me I'm old or what ?
over 700 posts ( I really do need to get out more )
