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(@diluted_metal)
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Close of the system
Shut off the cell
You just destroy 'em
Escape from this hell

So you fall into this darkness
Fall all alone
Death only be shown

Destroy the system
Nothing is forgiven
You Just destroy 'em
Nothing is worth livin

So you fall into this darkness
Fall all alone
Death only be shown

You send shivers down my spine
Voices that aint mine
Places breed for torement
Never understood what this world meant

So you fall into this darkness
Fall all alone
Death only be shown

I love Slipknot, Korn, System of a Down, Ill Nino, Fear Factory, Statc-X, Machine Head, Mudvayne, DevilDriver and South Africa's greatest metal band Seether.


   
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(@alangreen)
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So, are we talking about a big guitar solo after a bridge with the final chorus repeated until fade?

"just destroy" -> "must destroy" perhaps?

Best,

A :-)

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(@diluted_metal)
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'must destroy' sounds much better, yeah i was thinkin of guitar solos', but very fast solo's

I love Slipknot, Korn, System of a Down, Ill Nino, Fear Factory, Statc-X, Machine Head, Mudvayne, DevilDriver and South Africa's greatest metal band Seether.


   
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 Mike
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Not bad, I like it. :)

I also like Alan's suggestion. I think it sounds and flows better.


   
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