My first post.
How long
should I wait?
Its getting late
and I'm frightened
that I might not stay awake.
How long
should we mourn?
Sitting here still born
under starry skys with
morning coming on.
Who we are
makes little difference.
That we are
makes all the difference.
If you only see the difference
Do you think that makes a diference?
How long
must we grieve?
And be patient to recieve
all the shining grace
that radiates from thee.
Who we are
makes little difference.
That we are
makes all the difference.
If you only see the difference
Do you think that makes a diference?
Hi, and welcome to the party.
What sort of feel are we looking for here - I got hold of it as a slow ballad but if it's supposed to be more System Of A Down you'd better let us know.
What's there is fine, but I'm left wanting more. Who's the hero? How did we get here? Have we got a map?
Best,
A :-)
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More of a finger picked folk balled.
its pretty good, i like it
I love Slipknot, Korn, System of a Down, Ill Nino, Fear Factory, Statc-X, Machine Head, Mudvayne, DevilDriver and South Africa's greatest metal band Seether.
The only thing that really sticks out to me is all the "difference's"
Who we are
makes little difference.
That we are
makes all the difference.
If you only see the difference
Do you think that makes a diference?
Maybe come up with something to change the last two?
Why do songs have to have a story? Poems don't. WHy such a trad thing goin on here?
