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The Girl You knew a Few Years Ago

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jus_another_sin
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I just wrote this song, in about 15 mins, and in all probabilities it's gonna show. I know probably the song doesn't look polished enough and that is where i was hoping to get some help. Visualise the song as: a guy knows this girl from his hometown, the girl loves him, he doesnt reaspond, because he feels like exploring more possiblities. He goes out of town, looks around but when he gets back he realises it was that girl he should have stayed with. But then he has already lost her...

The Girl You Knew a Few Years Ago

She came around and she rocked my world
Like a movie-star but she's the same ol' girl
(chorus)You shouldn't have looked away(/chorus)
because she takes away your breath NNN-OO-WW
(chorus)You should ahve made her stay(/chorus)
Because when you were bouncing around to and fro
You lost the girl you knew a few years ago

You said you were looking for love
So you left the town for anothewr world
Late night parties and singles Bar
You looked around and went too far
(chorus)But no one caught the eye(/chorus)
(chorus)No angel passed you bu(/chorus)
and your still alone
because you let her love pass and go
The girl you knew a few years ago

(Chorus)
Now she's older, A little bit colder
You can put up a show
But you wont impress her
She gives you a shy smile
But dont feel all mystified
If you end up driving home all alone
Because you lost the girl you knew a few years ago
(/Chorus)

You look in her eyes and she touches your soul
She's the salvation you were looking for
She'll make you happy, complete your life
She'll be the one, she'll satisfy
It's just so sad you wont see any of those
(Chorus)
Because you lost that pretty girl
Because you lost that pretty girl
(/Chorus)
She's the girl you lost a few years ago.

there's a lot of difference between an open mind and a hole in the head !


   
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jus_another_sin
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I guess is either too good or too bad to comment :p i guess it would be the latter.

there's a lot of difference between an open mind and a hole in the head !


   
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