I know this one still needs a lot of polishing but it's more complete than some of my others:
The Hurting Side Of You
Verse 1
I can't seem put it all together
the reasons why we let it slip away
and now I'm left here with only the memory
of the pain in your eyes as I walked away
Verse 2
There's an old song on the radio that's playing
All about a man who's lost his way
And as those guitar's keep on ringin
I try to make it through to one more day
Chorus
And I can make it through the blue mornings
and til that noon time sun is high
but when those evening stars start to shining
I know I'm on my way back to the hurtin side
of you
Bridge
Somewhere between the rhyme and the reason
I broke the heart that I held in my hand
But when I saw the pain you were feeling
I walked away from the hurtin side of you
Chorus
And I can make it through the blue mornings
and til that noon time sun is high
but when those evening stars start to shining
I know I'm on my way back to the hurtin side
of you
I know I'm on my way back to the hurting side
of you
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Mike
Mike
Wow...suprised you got no replys for this....it has incredible flow....and some great imagery....you portrayed the emotion very well....
only thing id really say is probably about how you wrote it out on here....i think you should change
And I can make it through the blue mornings
and til that noon time sun is high
but when those evening stars start to shining
I know I'm on my way back to the hurtin side of you
To...
And I can make it through the blue mornings
and til that noon time sun is high
but when those evening stars start to shining
I know I'm on my way back to the hurtin side
Of you
Thats it really....prob seems a bit picky but it just makes it easy to read :wink:
Keep it up!
Rain Shadow
Hey thanks. I thought this one was going to die without a response. It took me a second to realize what you meant about the change but I see it now and it makes sense.
Thanks,
Mike
I love your song. I can relate. It sounds good. I second the change from lostbeginning....
You cannot live a perfect day without doing something for someone who will never be able to repay you.
Life is not about what I've done, what I should've done, what I could've done. Its about what I can do and what I will do.
wow !!! that is real good I had to listen to this one
keep it up
Thanks, guys. I'm surprised to see this topic come back around. I appreciate all the good words.
Mike
Mike
