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(@richard4)
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the joker

i have been a fool and been fooled
and lost a love that slips away
as words fail to bring us back
can i have the last word sorry doesnt cut it
this emptiness will eat me alive

shoot the fool
the joker done wrong
the idiot cant have his angel
the lost and the lonly one

now i dont deserve you
or your pardon
please look at me again
one night one kiss
ive lost it all
oh reality reality
i am not happy
whatever that means

shoot the fool
the joker done wrong
the idiot cant have his angel
the lost and the lonly one

still ask me i will say yes
to those hated questions
that you ignore most


   
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(@bonzai_man)
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I really like the chorus, but the line "can i have the last word sorry doesnt cut it" doesnt really seem to fit. Thats just my opinion, take it for what worth you want.


   
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(@richard4)
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cheers, i see what you mean about that line i think i was just writing what i felt and not paying much attetion to the flow of the song


   
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(@musicmaniac221)
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Joined: 21 years ago
Posts: 148
 

I really like the chorus, but the line "can i have the last word sorry doesnt cut it" doesnt really seem to fit. Thats just my opinion, take it for what worth you want.

I agree with bonzai...that one line just doesnt fit...other than that...no complaints

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