hey people i wrote this i have been for some time now working to improve this, hope you like it.
it needs urgent crtique
i hope u like
chords are
intro G Dadd9 C Cadd9
verse a melody in Am
bridge intro
chorus D/G D Dadd9 C Cadd9
“so nice to see youâ€
verse
Do you stand there?
A painting in reflection
Vivid in emotion
So bare
Coloured by a distinctive voice
Telling your head down
bridge
To lust over dead fragments
Of minor memories
Left your head so I can say
chorus
So nice to see you
So nice to see you
Do you Speak to me?
Become completely fragile
So Staggered
take your hands just to
Pull me
Towards you in a shine down
To lust over dead fragments
Of minor memories
Open each eye to say
So nice to see you
So nice to see you
So nice to see you
So nice
it's good, but I would change the whole to lust over dead fragments bit-1.too cliche 2.sends wrong message other thab that its all good!
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Good song. I agree with dragona. I would change lust to dwell. Thats just my opinion take it for what you will.
