What the frick are you blabbering on about here...all I see is another World History lesson, yeah, I take that at school and trust me , I don't see ma...

it's good, but I would change the whole to lust over dead fragments bit-1.too cliche 2.sends wrong message other thab that its all good!

what you think even if it sucks :lol: it's cool

Why are you avoiding me,Is it something I said,Well you can't blame me for lovin you,Cuz I fell on my head again,And you can't say I didn't try,To jus...

I know the tempo is hard to figure out, but that's cuz it changes a few times throughout, at the beginning, it's four/four (I think, this is from memo...

Thanks, I got another song comin', just have to post it, but I'm still gonna work on this one... :P

No offense taken, happens all the time when people can't see me, then if they can see me then they're like, nope, she's a chick, but it's just my pers...

thanks, yeah, I know the endings lame to me to and I wrote it! I need a conclusion with conclusion, but I don't have a conclusion yet, I'm still going...

I am soooooooooo bored, don't you people reply to anything!!!!!! I could wait a week and not get a reply!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Urgh....plz reply, i'm going ...

it's really good and shows a lot of emotions, but you need to fix the meter, you have some really, really long lines and you have some two or three wo...

I would put As I stand, cold in the rain I like it :D :) :o :shock: :shock: 8) :lol: :P :wink: :shock: :shock:

thankies :D :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :s...

awwwwwwwwwww, that's so sweet, it's good, but you might wanna pick a chorus and stick with it, I like the bridge, it's cool :wink: :shock: :shock: ...

:oops: oh, k sorry (i'm such a dork), i probly didn't read it right the first time then either and saw double or something...oh well, i like it thoug...