This one probably still needs a little work, any suggestions would be apreciated
(V1)
You were always there by my shoulder,
Baby you're my lucky four leaf clover
I would never throw you away
I still cherish you up to this day..
Even though you're gone…
I'll always remember you
And all the things you taught me too..
(Chorus)
You gave me hope
When I needed it most
Gave me light
To find my way
My four leaf clover
I'll never get over you…
(V2)
I only wish I could say
Your life wasn't lived in pain
Going through all those things
That you had..
And I wish I could say
That I was there when you needed
Like you were there for me
But, My four leaf clover
They stepped all over you..
There was nothing I could do
But watch and ache
That whole night
It was all a mistake..
(Chorus)
You gave me life
When I was dieing
Blessed my soul
Through all the lying
My four leaf clover
I'll never get over you…
(V3)
I only wish
That I would have done the same..
My four leaf clover
Please understand
My train of thought
Burst into flame
And I was lost…
I only wish
You were here today
To hear me say my pleas..
Please- forgive me
In your honor
I'll spread your ash across the sea
And let your luck flow
To whoever needs it the most
(Bridge)
Spread your luck around
I'm so glad I found
A life as great as this
Though you, I'll always miss
(Chorus)
You gave me love
Through all the hatred
Picked me up
When I was down
My four leaf clover
I'll never get over you…
awwwwwwwwwww, that's so sweet, it's good, but you might wanna pick a chorus and stick with it, I like the bridge, it's cool :wink: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: i love that face!
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the first legal high is spinning around!!
It's good.
I would stay away from using the four leaf clover line too much.
"My four leaf clover , I'll never get over you" is such a cool line that it can become watered down by saying it in the verses several times.
Maybe you could take a look at other "lucky" objects to describe her in place of those clover lines.
just a thought...
Always there when I needed you
Baby you're my lucky rabbit foot
I only wish that I would have done the same..
My lucky charm Please understand
these are terrible in the actual 10 seconds that I thought about it....but if you thought about the idea some, you might come up with some good ones.
Keep it up!
I don't think I'm a lot dumber than you think that I thought I once was - White Goodman (Dodgeball)
And I would also agree to pick a chorus and stay with it.
I don't think I'm a lot dumber than you think that I thought I once was - White Goodman (Dodgeball)
