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The Scars Remain

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(@portia)
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V1
Somewhere within a calloused heart
burned one too many times
hides the helpless little girl
with no more tears to cry
a life spent in limbo
she moves from one thing to the next
but she finds no escape
just a long trail of regrets

CHORUS
You can run away.
wish away
or rage against
the pain
but there's no amount of time
that can erase the stains
and no matter what you cut away
the scars will still remain

V2
Lost inside a tangled mind
she wrestles with her sin
as the demons from her past
still haunt her from within
she tries to forget the ledge
she left so long ago
but when she closes her eyes she still
sees rocky cliffs below

CHORUS

BRIDGE
from constant conflict anger grows
into something she can't control
against an unclear enemy
so she focuses it inwardly
despite her screams
and used up blades
she can't make anything
go away

CHORUS

CHORUS


   
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(@mysticmoonangel)
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Joined: 19 years ago
Posts: 166
 

I like this song, you can feel emotion in your words and you get a good vison on the subject
good job :D

mystic


   
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(@nolongerme)
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Joined: 19 years ago
Posts: 475
 

This is a great song, i think i can identify with it easily and it flowed right along :D :D


   
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 Mike
(@mike)
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Joined: 20 years ago
Posts: 2892
 

I really like how you have the song flowing.

Very nice,

Mike


   
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