Life so complicated

please someone tell me what you think good or bad !!!! :roll:

wow this is reallly really good

well done plenty of emotion and feeling with each verse well done

would love to hear it , I thought a country slow song maybe

well done again

Thanks lotto king

hope to get music put to it soon unfortionatly I don't play or sing, or have any friends that play or sing
just hanging around waiting for the right person to come along

mystic

Life So Complicated

She doesn't know why
She doesn't have any shoes
Or why her clothes don't look so new
She doesn't like the guy
Who comes out at night
An says he can make everything alright

She raised her self from a little girl
An only child in a mixed up world
Her momma wasn't there
Her daddy didn't care
Oh no

She found her self in a lonely world
A messed up head
And her own little girl
Her daddy wasn't there
Her mama didn't care
Oh no

She doesn't know why
She doesn't have any shoes
Or why her clothes doesn't look so new
She doesn't like the guy who comes out at night
And says he can make everything all right

She finds herself on familiar streets
Baggin for money or something to eat
They pass her by
She doesn't know why
Her life so complicated
No she doesn't know why
They pass her bye
Her life so complicated
Her life, life so complicated

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thanks:)
Mystic

Just add a nice little outro that really ties it all together and that's it

very nice lyrics well done

keep it up

L.K