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(@kevin72790)
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In the past half hour I was "feeling it" so I wrote a song. Had those late night blues. Hearing it in my head, this is just a 'basic' 12 bar blues.
The Willow's Weep for Me
Kevin O'Connor

Last night my heart turned blue...
My uh baby said we are through...
I said uh last night my heart turned blue...
She said boy, me and you are through...
Now the willow tree's uh weep for me...

This mornin I heard the wind whistlin...
And lady wind was playin the blues... (on her guitar)
I swear I heard the wind whistle...
Some 'ol blues for my blue heart...
Oh, those willow's still weep for me...

Tomorrow I'll go find my baby...
And tell her my heart is blue...
I said I'll go find my lady...
Tell her my heart has turned blue...
Cause maybe if I'm lucky...
Those willows won't weep for me no more.

It's basic, I know. But the blues is about how you feel and that's how I feel right now...anything you guys think is creative about it, or something, or if you think anything is horrible, please let me know. Any type of feedback, to me, is good feedback. :)

I'll try to record some guitar for this, to the best of my capabilities. I feel the blues in my heart (haha, funny, that's what the song is about), but my fingers aren't ready to catch up with it. :)


   
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Anyone? :)


   
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