Verse One
I whisper in your ear,
Can you hear me?
I shout out loud,
Is it me that you can't see?
Listen to me (Listen)
Just try to see me too.
Just hear me (Hear)
Even though were through.
Chorus
Hello, hello, hello,
Listen to me, can't you hear?
Hello, hello, hello,
See me my dear.
I hear these voices in my head,
‘Love thy lover'
Is what they said.
And That's what I'll do.
Verse Two
Okay, I know,
That you have gone.
So don't listen to me,
Listen to the song.
Listen to me (Listen)
Just try to see me too.
Just hear me (Hear)
Even though I don't know what to do.
Chorus
Bridge
(I love you, I hate you)
What can I do?
(I love you, I hate you)
Fine then, were through.
Chorus
Hello, hello, hello,
Don't pretend you can't hear
Hello, hello, hello,
Look at me dear.
I hear these voices in my head,
‘Love thy lover'
Is what they said.
Forget it, cause I'm over you.
I'm over you...
I hear these voices...
I'm over you...
Hello, hello, hello....
Jake Gyllenhaal/my oh my/your so cute/you make me sigh! I <3 JAKE!
I Liked this alot heres 2 things in my preferance that would make it better.
just in the first verse to go like so
I whisper in your ear,
Can't you hear?
I shout out loud,
But can't you see?
just in my preferance but if you leave it the way it is it's really good to. which ever you perfer. good song :D
Thanks :D . I had some trouble with finding the right rhymes
Jake Gyllenhaal/my oh my/your so cute/you make me sigh! I <3 JAKE!
this song starts off good but as you keep reading it teads to become repeatitive and thats not allways bad, just i think the verses could have more meaning the chorus is good very different and i like it. so just try to understand what i said because i know im not makin much sense but just think of more input for the verses other than that i loved it
