(Yes another one, but, oh well... :D )
I don't know how you are going to take this lyric, but I'll risk it.
Hope you can enjoy it in some way :?
It's about 6-7 month old...
Any critiques are welcome!
TV-aided
1)
Half past seven in the evening keeps you up dead sure careening.
Watching all these cruel crimes happening in awed times.
Close you in, secure your basement, stay up all night with enthusiasm.
Set the trap and place your bets
Which felon will die next.
RF1:
We're not the same when we see red.
Just knock the sane onto the head.
Throw it over board and slice
Because world heroes survive.
2)
All the others are no brothers, trust yourself but not your neighbours.
A bomb can make or break your day, so launch them all without delay.
Sit back and start to enjoy the copycats you will destroy.
Drop A-Bombs and watch it grow,
The mushroom cloud, free-show.
RF2:
We're not the same when we see red.
Just knock the sane onto the head.
Throw it over board and slice
Because world heroes have died.
We ought to be so medi-sane, just crush the sane with medicine.
It's more than anything I've ever seen since confidence is not the mean.
4)
Hide behind the wall of justice, where we are planning out the parties.
Don't think about it's complicated, coz we are all so TV-aided.
Watch the last bush burning down, where you've hidden far too long.
Hail the a-ok-bomb's spread,
coz heroes must be dead.
RF3:
We're all the same when we play dead.
Just lock the sane out of your head.
Deviated – fear advised
Because world heroes get fried.
NO MORE THEORY!!
um...
KNOW MORE THEORY!!!!
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motz
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Hi!
Such a strange song you got here
talking about bombs and death is not easy... search carefully for the right music and rythm for this
I specially like the line
"A bomb can make or break your day, so launch them all without delay"
I live in spain, where many bombs "can make your day" so I know how you feel when singing it
take care
there
what's this word ? careening ( I have never heard of it before , am I so dumb or is there a type o here ?
awed ? same again ? please explain .
sorry to sound so negative but I just don't understand
cheers
Aghhhh
Not only am I a senior citizen
I'm now a bloody senior member
Are you people trying to tell me I'm old or what ?
over 700 posts ( I really do need to get out more )
to careen in the literal thing: to get bound and thrown over board (so we are assuming that we are on a ship... ;) ) and then pulled under it.
I'm not very good in explaining it, though :cry:
That was a form of punishment.
O course it's not meant in that way exactly... but I carry on this idea (not the meaning) in the refrain, as well...
awed: it's basically the same as daunted...
I know this song isn't your standard-love song but I just write about everything that comes to my mind... (So it's save to say that I have a lot of weird songs too... :D )
sorry, I hope it didn't sound too confronting, that's not what I wanted...
NO MORE THEORY!!
um...
KNOW MORE THEORY!!!!
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motz
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thanks I understand now thanks
must have been having a blonde day
ha ha says the old man
Aghhhh
Not only am I a senior citizen
I'm now a bloody senior member
Are you people trying to tell me I'm old or what ?
over 700 posts ( I really do need to get out more )
like you see a beautiful women...
then you are in awe*
or you are awed by the power of this song,
awed means you are amazed or stunned
It's 15 Till And She Has The Other 45 In Her Mouth.
Ok, I didn't get it across correctly, or as I should have done...
awed: i think this heavily depends in which circumstances you use it.
i think stunned fits best for the fundamental explanation because it doesn't feature any feelings yet. It neither says if you are stunned in a positive or negative way. These get added right in the sentence or story you use it.
So thanks for your input, hope we could clear this one up :)
lotto king, don't be so harsh to yourself :wink:
NO MORE THEORY!!
um...
KNOW MORE THEORY!!!!
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motz
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I'm all for stream of consiousness writing, but some of these lines don't make any sense at all.
They could at least pretend to. 8)
The king of rock, some say lives
the lizard king, is surely dead
the king of France, lost his head
the King of Kings... bled
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