hi all..i wrote this a good while ago now..im getting a new mic this week so will hopefully be able to record it at some point..
dont leave...(unfinished business)
v1
please squeeze my hand again
you've got fight left in you
your more than just my better half
your red cheeks turn to blue....
v2
your hand is slipping away
your eyes they start to close
i need you here for one more day
to lead the life you chose
chorus
please dont leave me now
you have a purpose
god please hear me somehow
unfinished business
v3
please turn on the lights
to show me where you are
im so scared of tonight
your here but yet so far
v4
a feeling of sadness floods my body
i start to shake..dont say goodbye
remember your words..im here dont worry
circling my head i start to cry..
chorus (repeat x2)
please dont leave me now
you have a purpose
god please hear me somehow
unfinished business
v5
im gasping for my breath
colour returns to your face
you have done it again..
turned away from heavens gates
v6
you grasp my hand again
my heart misses a beat
with all my heart i thank you god..
for putting her back on her feet....
any comments are welcome..
thanking you
gaz
"people laugh at me because im different...i pity you..because your all the same"
I thought that was alright. Again like I've said before to others I'm terrible at giving criticism. I really like the line:
"Red cheeks turned to blue"
