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(@impossibleprincess)
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V1:
Magical fairytales
And shadows of her past
This time there ain't no chase
And there will be no more attack
Her mind's at ease now
Her skies are forever blue
She's living life in peace now
As if she never knew

The love he gave her
How he forsaked her
She never seems to remember
So from now until forever

Chorus:
She'll be
Walking through the clouds
Riding with the wind
No fear, never any doubts
Only happiness within
She's
Walking through the clouds
Aiming for her dreams
No borders, no bounds
She runs forever free

V2:
Living every day
As if it were her last
Never leaving any trace
And she's never looking back
After all the pain she once has known
Now her heart cannot be chained
The magic will have flown
When in the morning she awakes

The hurt he gave her
When he forsaked her
She never seems to recall
How she once lost it all

Chorus:
She'll be
Walking through the clouds
Riding with the wind
No fear, never any doubts
Only happiness within
She's
Walking through the clouds
Aiming for her dreams
No borders, no bounds
She runs forever free

The love he gave her
How he betrayed her
She doesn't seem to remember
So from now until forever

Chorus:
She'll be
Walking through the clouds
Riding with the wind
No fear, never any doubts
Only happiness within
She's
Walking through the clouds
Aiming for her dreams
No borders, no bounds
She runs forever free

You'll never get to heaven if you're scared of getting high!


   
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(@plooky)
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Joined: 19 years ago
Posts: 21
 

sounds alright, but just my opinion, i think if you saved the second half of the chorus for the second or even third time through, just to build tension a bit more (again, just my opinion).

like the idea of walking through the clouds too, that sounds pretty cool and gives a couple of really good images.

just as an aside, and with nothing to do with your song, you'd be a kylie fan with a moniker like impossible princess?

anyway, cheers

p

lois: 'Chris, women are not objects!'
peter: 'Your mother's right son, listen to what it says.'


   
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