dull resent really...but yeah, i think you may be on to something there about the way to finish it, find a way to say i stopped looking, stopped tryin...

well, thats the thing of it...i dont know what happens yet and i can't think of a good way to say that, so i thought the final verse was delibrately v...

that sounds pretty old-bluesish, sounds good... i can see a blind old man with a broken beer bottle neck howling it out in a smoky pub somewhere out ...

delta, spice girls... EVIL!!!!delta is the worst thing to come out of our happy land of oz!sorry, i can't stand her music (go back to neighbours!)

the offspring have also done a number of tunes about drugs and their bad affects on people (as have many other bands as well, as previously mentioned)...

i've only just discovered this post...A song by Stevie Ray Vaughan, Life Without You, moves me everytime I hear it. It's more the music than the lyric...

sounds like stuff i saw when i was a kid and did stupid things! cool, really good. (I probably should listen to the beatles tune again to get the melo...

sounds alright, but just my opinion, i think if you saved the second half of the chorus for the second or even third time through, just to build tensi...

cool, thanks for the suggestion... i was thinking that the other person took everything... but it does seem somewhat comic book that way, so suggestio...