New things whisper in my head
I can understand them but can't repeat their names
Nobody knows the way i'm going
And I've everything to gain
Let's go now
Before they see
Run with what
May not exist
Let's forget our differences
Tell me what the subtle hints mean
What an absurdity it is
I can't figure you out
I'm happier than I will ever be
Forgetting just to see myself forget
Whisper in my ear that it's truly confusing
And don't let me realize what I've let out
Let's go now
Before they see
Run with what
May not exist
If there was nothing there before
I'll make it as real as the time we never kissed
is this totally stupid? can you tell what it's about? i need feedback, please, if you can give it.
Do not disturb the sleeping dragons, for you are crunchy and taste good with ketchup.
hey! after a couple of read through ive come to the conclusion that i do like it!...as for what its about..well to me it sounds like a very confused person, trying to figure out someone and at the same time trying to figure out themselves? am i correct?
thank you! I'm still not sure it conveys exactly what I want it to. It's about loving someone even though you could never tell anyone and being confused about the way they feel. It's a little out there, I know.
Do not disturb the sleeping dragons, for you are crunchy and taste good with ketchup.
I struggled with some of the line lengths, but that last line is inspired.
Best,
A :-)
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maybe if i heard waht you played along with it i could understand it better, but i agree with alan green some lines do get long, but other tahn that its good. :)
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