hey. haven't been posting here in a(long) while...
You are sand.
When autumn tears at my coat
And leaves bury the roads
I can't help but think of you
Because there's an ancient belief, born in the desert,
Where the night is vast as the ocean above you
It is said there‘s a tree growing on the moon
And each time a leaf falls,
Eyes pour salt,
A lifetime crumbles to sand
In an hourglass that won't be turned again
So when autumn tears at my coat
And numerous leaves bury the roads
I think of you and your capsizing boat
the 'old belief' thing does actually exist.. it's a Somali belief. at least I've read that in a book.
and the other part ... happened, you know.
cheers,
bluenightangel
"oh, eventually it will break your heart" - anders wendin
i like it...
"i wish the world was made of chocolate"
[--Tyler Burkum--]
She's calling out to You, this is a call; this is a call out... [--Thousand Foot Krutch--]
wow, suprised you aint got many replys for this yet...Great imagery!!...really like it...... im thinking maybe u should add some more to it??
Nice song....keep it up!!
Rain Shadow
:shock: (speachless)
There's a thin fine line between hate and rage.
Now watch the line be crossed and break!
This is exceptionally good and very moving.
thank you all very much:)
I'm glad you like it.. especially as it means a lot to me.
yes, +lost beginning+, I did try to add a bit more but couldn't come up with anything that would be worthy of it. so i just hope it can stand as it is.
thank you again.
take care,
bluenightangel
"oh, eventually it will break your heart" - anders wendin
yeah ur right...n u never know adding something could take something away from the great peice you already have...
8) , again very nice song
Rain Shadow
This is really good. There's something about the mood it puts me in that I just love. Can't really explain it though.. Not much else to say. Great job!
Oh by the way.. do you have music for this?
Peachfur
hi and thank you a lot, peachfur.
no i haven't got music for this (yet?).
cheers,
bluenightangel
"oh, eventually it will break your heart" - anders wendin
great stuff.....I can imagine this done with very minimal backing, just a single guitar, bass and very little drums......and some nice doomy minor chords.....
:D :D :D
Vic
"Sometimes the beauty of music can help us all find strength to deal with all the curves life can throw us." (D. Hodge.)
