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(@taylorr)
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Hey,

I just wrote 3 new songs with my bassist and we thought we'd record them real quick. They are 3 rough demos of some new songs. Just me with an acoutic and my voice. Still have to flesh out most of them. Tell me what you think about any or all of them.

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Thanks,
Taylor

Lyrics
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Maps

Lets weather this storm
as long as it lasts
because after it's done
we'll still have our maps
reminding us of
things that we've done
places we've been
songs that we've sung

trust me trust me
i know this land
trust me trust me trust me
my hearts in your hands

if you could find a cartographer
that could let me know where I stand with here
Then I'd give you everything I'm worth
If you could make a map of
everything under the sun
then put us next to each other and be done

i know where to go
if you'd just take my hand
i'll give you my heart
if you meant what you said
make my day
its just what we want
ive explored you now
i know you back to front
---------
Medicine Cabinet

I knew you were a fraud
when you said you would give anything a shot
i feel sick everytime that i wake up
you're breaking up... woo

my eyelids droop
my senses go to hell
i might not look bad
but babe i hide it well
i got ten seconds
to get you out of my head
as soon as i forgive then i can forget

What were you thinking, when you said forever?
Now i cant see us back together
and it makes me sick how you called it quits
now the way it seems neither one of us will be missed

Its so cliche
get out of my way
you're leaving
but i beg you to stay
i know its overused
but im saying i have to
keep you around
i cant forget you

What were you thinking, when you said forever?
Now i cant see us back together
and it makes me sick how you called it quits
now the way it seems neither one of us will be missed

youre the best mistake
i ever made
i've tried the others
they're not the same
you blew my mind
right from the start
i wish we never
got torn apart

Do you feel better?
I wrote a letter
and it didnt even say anything about you
do you feel better?
i found some shelter
from the hateful words you spew because you're too cool
do you feel better?
because i feel better
that last remark didnt even make a bruise
do you feel better?
i hope you feel better
because i am over, i am over, i am over you
------
View Ridge East

There was an accident
Outside my door
There was a girl who said
She couldn't take anymore
There was a boy who thought
He could hold the world up
and a boy who thought
This girl wasnt much

But she pulled the needle from her eyes
She saw through his twelve sided lies
Now hes begging for her to take him back
But shes turned around and hes facing the facts

Look at that
Job well done
Hes cold to the touch
He aint getting none

There was an ambulance
Outside my back door
there was a boy who was
he couldnt take anymore
there was a girl who thought
she was the queen
and this girl she thought
she held the world by a string
but he ran his car into a tree
and hes screaming did you notice me
and hes laying there in his brothers arms
whos screaming now "he did no harm"

look at him
hes cold to the touch
job well done
you aint got no one

All lyrics and music Copyright Taylor Romoser and Eric Chalk, 2006

aka Izabella

 
Posted : 04/12/2006 7:40 am
(@fleaaaaaa)
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I think with more practice these would sound better, there is promise, there is a vibe about them still

check mine out too while your here, pretty rough too......

http://www.myspace.com/adamnao

together we stand, divided we fall..........

 
Posted : 05/12/2006 1:17 pm
(@smokindog)
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I just listened to all three, lots of potential in all of them IMO 8) "View Ridge East" gets my vote for the best lyric and "Maps" is my favorite over all 8) I can't wait to here the finished versions.--ken

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Posted : 06/12/2006 12:14 am