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New Song I Wrote - 'Precipice'

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ab0msnwman

(@ab0msnwman)

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Hi guys,

Here is a song that is not really "new," I recorded it several months ago, but I have always really liked it. The recording is pretty rough, but I think the song is OK. Hope you enjoy!

http://download.yousendit.com/933B6B577FC3EAD7

As always, ALL feedback is welcome, tell me what you like AND don't like.

Thanks guys!!

-Patrick

Posted : 03/12/2006 8:21 pm

Bish

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That was nice. I liked it. It built with attitude.

Ooohhh great finish! :D

Bish

"I play live as playing dead is harder than it sounds!"

Posted : 03/12/2006 10:10 pm

Dan T.

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Really good song! 8) I like how it slowly builds up, and then comes back down. Very "moody". :D Great job. 8)

Dan

"The only way I know that guarantees no mistakes is not to play and that's simply not an option". David Hodge

Posted : 03/12/2006 10:53 pm

margaret

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+1 on everything Bish and Dan T said.

Very engaging piece.

Margaret

When my mind is free, you know a melody can move me
And when I'm feelin' blue, the guitar's comin' through to soothe me ~

Posted : 04/12/2006 2:18 am

SMOKEHOUSE

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i really like this amazing piece, well done :D on the down side i dont think i will ever be able to play like that :( oh well thats life ..smoke

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Posted : 04/12/2006 6:29 am