A small, simple piece I put together, please see Longing on my dmusic page
Comments, criticisms very welcome (just don't be brutal .. I know not to ask for that :-))
[Edit:] In particular, I would like feedback on three particular experiments:
- I tried to substitute some 9th and 7th chords in the rhythm track and also use voicing higher up on the neck, rather than the open
postion. How do they sound? Is the chord track reasonably audible? Should it be louder?
-I tried a program called jamstix, a VST drum program that I purchased. Still barely limping with it. How did the drums sound? I need to figure out how to fine tune the program..
Thanks in advance!
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[Edit 2] I uploaded a new version without the extra delay, and readjusted the mix to make the chords more audible.. [end edit 2]
--vink
"Life is either an adventure or nothing" -- Helen Keller
Very respectible job, Vink. The recording quality wasn't the best - it sounds like a recording session in a very large hall, with the mics very far from the amplifier. But, I liked the song itself. Also, nice tone.
Nice piece
I really like the overlapping leads.
Good Job
John
