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Colour Wombat

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(@ignar-hillstrom)
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Another little song. All ideas, suggestions, comments or random blurbs that might not have anything to do with this but still seem funny will be written down by me. I'm not sure which tracks will eventually make it to a project and which won't, but I think I kinda like this one. Have no fear and speak thou mind!

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_songInfo.cfm?bandID=361288&songID=6168366
Colour Wombat

I feel no shame at all
for what you think I've done
I don't care what you'll say
the race is all but run

I feel no shame at all
for what you think I've done
I don't care what you'll say to me
the race is all but run

I tried so hard to make you see
What life can offer you
If you don't believe in me
I'll have to let you down

I tried so hard to make you see
What life can offer you
If you don't believe in me
There's nothing I can do

 
Posted : 14/01/2008 2:32 pm
 KR2
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but I think I kinda like this one. Have no fear and speak thou mind!
Careful there, Ignar.
That's like giving some of us a license to kill and you're showing us your more conventional side.
Yeh, I like it too. Yep, definitely a keeper.

Very somber. Something to be placed at the conclusion of an album.
Which means you were sober when you wrote it but apparently not so when you uploaded it because of the comment "Have no fear and speak thou mind!"
The title is ummm connected how?
Maybe call it "Monday morning". Since this is more how I feel when I drag myself out of bed on Mondays.
Speak my mind? Rarely am I given permission. Thanks.

It's the rock that gives the stream its music . . . and the stream that gives the rock its roll.

 
Posted : 14/01/2008 4:15 pm
 KR2
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Thought of a title.
"Dirge for Wombat"

Ken (with license to critique)

It's the rock that gives the stream its music . . . and the stream that gives the rock its roll.

 
Posted : 14/01/2008 4:58 pm
(@ignar-hillstrom)
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Heh, I like the word dirge but I need the colour there. So 'Dirge for Colour Wombat' sounds good to me, the song definitely sounds like a dirge. Thanks for the suggestion!

 
Posted : 15/01/2008 9:06 pm
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I love the arrangment..just piano, guitar and vocal :D One of your best yet i think. deceptively simple, but intense :D

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Posted : 16/01/2008 5:10 am