ok, solo took millions of tries, i could play it perfectly when not recording but when i hit that red button, stuff changes. i used the best one.
singing sucks like usual.
"Those who dream by night, in the dusty recesses of their minds wake in the day to find that all was vanity; but dreamers of the day are dangerous men, for they may act their dream with open eyes, and make it possible.
The playing is getting better. Nothing to complain about there. It sounds good. The singing on the other hand. I think you do well with the verses but you're trying way too hard on the chorus. Those parts are done mostly in falsetto, I think. So I think this is one case where you shouldn't have to belt it out. It's supposed to be a little mellow and held back. For the most part, a good effort though. I noticed you didn't add the rhythm guitar in there.
Guitar is very nice. At times it seems as if the song goes just a bit too fast or you don't really remember the notes since it sounds a bit rushed, but for the rest it is excellent. The voice is actually improving as well, but what I never get the idea you mean what you sing. How about writing your own lyrics?
Rich,
I thought it was really good. I guess I would agree with hue you don't have to belt out the chorus.
I really like your tone.
"It's all about stickin it to the man!"
It's a long way to the top if you want to rock n roll!
