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let me know what you think of my newest song...... :D
together we stand, divided we fall..........
A bit repetitious, but a nice tune. Keep working on it.
Margaret
When my mind is free, you know a melody can move me
And when I'm feelin' blue, the guitar's comin' through to soothe me ~
Its OK.Nice Tune :D A bit repetitious..but its ok :D
and its an ok from me :D be nice to have a break with another instrument or female backing vocal.....smoke
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thanks, it was a very quick and rough version of the song, I was in fact making quite a lot of it up on the spot so I definately agree that it could be improved however as I am the only musician on the piece I am a little unsure how to improve the way I work. I generally have an idea for a song and press record then start layering over it, I guess I should try redoing the song with more structure etc.
together we stand, divided we fall..........
you can always ask other musicians to help from g/n i have from time to time and i have also took part in collaborations, i play harp and my daughter does vocal if thats of any help? best wishes .smoke
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