Posted this before. I guess it's not worthy of comment. I can take anything you want to throw. I'm not into playing other peoples music so I want to here everything... bad or good.
It's the first song on the music page.
It's 'Testing Part two' you want a comment on, Cringe?
Don
BoxBoy
I was asking about Skei.Karpe. Sorry if that"s not the first song? If not I will change it.
good rythem and vocals, could have used a solo at around the 2:50 mark, that would
have brouht more life to it , but overall good 8)
even god loves rock-n-roll
I know I listened to this before it had any vocals. I must've missed it when you first posted it with the vocals....sorry about that.
I like this piece a lot. Can't think of much in the way of critique at this point. Only thing I can think of is that maybe the vocals are too "nice". Might be interesting to try it with harder-edged vocals once and see what that does.
Can you post the lyrics for us?
Margaret
When my mind is free, you know a melody can move me
And when I'm feelin' blue, the guitar's comin' through to soothe me ~
What was that!? :shock: :lol: J/K, really nice song... needs a ripping guitar solo! 8)
Dan
"The only way I know that guarantees no mistakes is not to play and that's simply not an option". David Hodge
Only thing I can think of is that maybe the vocals are too "nice".
I thought the vocals were to pretty also. It was way to nice with one vocal track the harmonies made it a little less nice. He is going to re-record the vocals. He intended them to be scratch tracks just so he had something to work with.
cringe,
put a solo in it, it will really liven it up :wink:
even god loves rock-n-roll
For some reason I get the feeling I should add a solo. :wink:
:D getting better all the time
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For some reason I get the feeling I should add a solo. :wink:
Seems to be the consensus. :D
Margaret
When my mind is free, you know a melody can move me
And when I'm feelin' blue, the guitar's comin' through to soothe me ~
Sound good to me. I might put a bit more reverb on the note that stands out in the end. Just a bit, mixed in and lowere volume. So that it's there, but not over taking anything else. But then again, I'm the ambient guy.
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