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Nice stuff Trev

Guitar sounds great OWA, glad you're still activley participating in this forum in someway.

Trev, great lyrics, while you may just think it's a song, songs are ways of presenting ideas, emotions, etc, and I think your lyrics ring true for many people.

I'm 50/50 on the way you chose to sing it - it's definitly different, and I respect that, but I wonder if a more straight forward take on it would have a different impact. Well, it WOULD change the feel of the song actually, so on second thought, maybe your vocals fit it perfect.

Glad you posted it.

I understand what your saying Taso

I have a copy of a single Voice but I think it lacking so much ..

Different well I wasn't merely looking for being different , I was going original - fresh OK OK different ..

I don't want anything I do to be " ISH "

I want others to have that "Hilch-ish " sound - feel :lol: :lol:

Probably aiming way higher then then I'll ever achieve ..

"The only limitations on my ambitions are the limitations themselves "

Thats a quote from " Trevor aka Hilch aka Barnabus Rox "

i think it has potential

but i kinda wish you gvae it a clear cut melody

it didnt seem like that was distinguishable in the overall feel of the song

lyric wise it was good, and good use of the theme

spencer

Thanks Spencer

Just learning how to put words to music , its harder than I EVER IMAGINED

Thanks appreciate the feed back

Trev.. 8)

I'm with Spencer here :D I like the tune and am a fan of OWA :twisted: Hope she is doing well :!:

I must digress.

I had a hard time following it and I can't say the vocals did anything for me either.

I think you've got some great abilities Trev, but to me it seems you are hiding them behind a cloak. I'm the only one cloaked around here so come out in the open. :wink: