Hi everybody,
Any feedback would be appreciated. The only comment I've had was that there were too many chords? Other than that, I know my timing stinks and my playing is very amateur. Any comments welcome, thanks, Gwynne.
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=341688 Sleep Just To Dream
©2006 Gwynne
G Em Am F Aadd9 Em D
I saw you crying as you watched over me
G Em Am F Aadd9 Em D
Guardian angel til my soul was set free
F Em C F Em D
I'll take our memories to our promised land
F Em Am G
Teardrops on my cheek, heart in my hand
Chorus
G D G F Em D
Sleep just to dream, so I can see you again
G D G F Em D
Sleep just to dream, fall into me and when
G D G F Em Am
you close your eyes and the sky turns out the lights
G D G F Em C
Please come to me, sleep just to dream
V2
Kiss on your pillow, warm breeze in the air
Whisper on your neck, feel me everywhere
Living for tonight, stars will dance around
The moonlight on your face, feet never touching ground
V3
I'll take you with me, Let me lead the way
If only the night will get me through another day
Heaven's in your eyes, are you waiting just for me
I could stay here forever, making love and make believe
You have a nice voice.
i agree, nice voice :D
even god loves rock-n-roll
Thanks for the compliments. I should have mentioned that I would like this to be faster than I'm playing it, I just have to practice it somemore. Anybody have any constructive critisism, does it need a bridge, is there too many chords, is it catchy? Come on guys and girls I can take it. G. :)
over all it sounds good, I wouldn't change the melody or any part of the song. I would work on the chord changes ( yes, to many of them) But besides a bit of tweaking I would say its pretty good :D
smokindog,
Thanks for the reply, I'm off to practice the changes. Thanks again!
I Think your voice is really good, and you were critical of your playing over on my thread but I think your playing is good it backs up your singing well. You have good timing, just keep playing
