Two demos.

hi,

i had a listen to comfortable..... not a bad song... too many mistakes on the guitar playing and hitting pitch though. Might benifit playing to a metronome. Got some good sections though

I agree. I should mention that these were one take affairs. I came home one day and just had a lot of energy, and recorded about 10 demos. I'm only going to share a couple though.

I think it is worth to mention that almost all the tempo changes I hear in this are intentional. But the tempo does seem a bit unsteady.

I definetly have soem problems singing, thats for sure. I've only really been singing for about 3 months, so I'm still training my voice. When I do these songs properly, it will be track by track, so I should be able to concentrate on hitting pitch.

Thanks very much for the feedback! Any other comments are welcome.