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(@nathan080)
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Hey guys,
Just recorded a rough copy of a song I've been working on over the past couple of days, and thought I would share it with you seeing as I seem to always be commenting on other people... will give you chance to get revenge :D.

The new song is the top one, "Graduation Confirmation", the other two are older but feel free to listen :).

http://www.overplay.com/band.asp?band_id=1006293

Constructive criticism is what I'm after... really looking for more ways to improve my voice... and songs!

Thanks guys,
Nath

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 lars
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Couldn't make it play - :?

...only thing I know how to do is to keep on keepin' on...

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(@nathan080)
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Couldn't make it play - :?

Just tested it and it works for me, it uses quicktime... maybe you need an update?

Nath

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 lars
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Browser problem - I'm running Opera (so should you BTW ;-) ) works in IE

I think your voice is good and your playing is good. Sounds good too in headphones - what do you use for recording?

For the song - not really my kind of song. I think I prefer songs with a progression that kinda "comes to rest" once in a while, more of a classical cadence if you know what I mean. Too me the song sounds busy and unresolved, but maybe that's what you're looking for.

Good job!

lars

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(@jackss565)
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Very good singing,


   
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(@nathan080)
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Browser problem - I'm running Opera (so should you BTW ;-) ) works in IE

I think your voice is good and your playing is good. Sounds good too in headphones - what do you use for recording?

For the song - not really my kind of song. I think I prefer songs with a progression that kinda "comes to rest" once in a while, more of a classical cadence if you know what I mean. Too me the song sounds busy and unresolved, but maybe that's what you're looking for.

Good job!

lars

Thanks for the input :). I use Audacity... its a free software, its pretty good, except for when I'm recording vocals over my guitar playing it tends to mess the timing up and I have to sync it manually... but you get what you pay for ;).

I understand what your saying about the song... But my knowledge of song writing is quiet limited... I have only been playing/singing for 6 months, so I'm hoping that this will come with more time :). Thanks again for listening.

Thanks jackss565 for the kind words, hope you enjoyed it :).

Any pointers on my voice anyone?

Thanks,
Nath

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