Hey guys,
Just recorded a rough copy of a song I've been working on over the past couple of days, and thought I would share it with you seeing as I seem to always be commenting on other people... will give you chance to get revenge :D.
The new song is the top one, "Graduation Confirmation", the other two are older but feel free to listen :).
http://www.overplay.com/band.asp?band_id=1006293
Constructive criticism is what I'm after... really looking for more ways to improve my voice... and songs!
Thanks guys,
Nath
Couldn't make it play - :?
...only thing I know how to do is to keep on keepin' on...
LARS kolberg http://www.facebook.com/sangerersomfolk
Couldn't make it play - :?
Just tested it and it works for me, it uses quicktime... maybe you need an update?
Nath
Browser problem - I'm running Opera (so should you BTW ;-) ) works in IE
I think your voice is good and your playing is good. Sounds good too in headphones - what do you use for recording?
For the song - not really my kind of song. I think I prefer songs with a progression that kinda "comes to rest" once in a while, more of a classical cadence if you know what I mean. Too me the song sounds busy and unresolved, but maybe that's what you're looking for.
Good job!
lars
...only thing I know how to do is to keep on keepin' on...
LARS kolberg http://www.facebook.com/sangerersomfolk
Very good singing,
Browser problem - I'm running Opera (so should you BTW ;-) ) works in IE
I think your voice is good and your playing is good. Sounds good too in headphones - what do you use for recording?
For the song - not really my kind of song. I think I prefer songs with a progression that kinda "comes to rest" once in a while, more of a classical cadence if you know what I mean. Too me the song sounds busy and unresolved, but maybe that's what you're looking for.
Good job!
lars
Thanks for the input :). I use Audacity... its a free software, its pretty good, except for when I'm recording vocals over my guitar playing it tends to mess the timing up and I have to sync it manually... but you get what you pay for ;).
I understand what your saying about the song... But my knowledge of song writing is quiet limited... I have only been playing/singing for 6 months, so I'm hoping that this will come with more time :). Thanks again for listening.
Thanks jackss565 for the kind words, hope you enjoyed it :).
Any pointers on my voice anyone?
Thanks,
Nath
