I just ended a 4 1/2 year relationship this week... it's hard but there is nothing like tragedy to get the creative juices flowing. I am moving the studio out this weekend and hopefully I will be recording some of this stuff REALLY soon. I'm dying without all my guitars!
Anyhoo, here is the song.
Noise in the notes
I hear you talking
But it's what you don't say
Yeah we are walking
Passing life away
I see you smile
But your eyes are lying
Don't even know
When we both quit trying
(chorus)
Listen to the music
Theres a noise in the notes
We both wanna to sing it
But it's stuck in our throats
It's been a long time coming
Just hard to say goodbye
Nobody likes to be here
And see an old love die
I know your lonely
I'm lonely too
We wanted eachother
But nothing grew
We both deserve better
Not to settle for less
I'm gonna sing it
Cause babe I wish you the best
(chorus)
Listen to the music
Theres a noise in the notes
We both wanna to sing it
But it's stuck in our throats
It's been a long time coming
Just hard to say goodbye
Nobody likes to be here
And see an old love die
- Theres a noise in the notes
- Yeah it's stuck in our throats
- But now it needs to sing
- We gotta let it ring
- Goodbye
- Goodbye
Each word led me on to another word,
Each deed to another deed.
-Havamal-
Hi there
This is a very moving piece you have written like already memtioned plenty of emotion .... Always a good thing in a song
Pete mentioned a couple of lines , I think there is alot more then just the ones Pete mentioned ..
"Just hard to say goodbye
Nobody likes to be here
And see an old love die "
and
But now it needs to sing
- We gotta let it ring
- Goodbye
- Goodbye
But the one Pete mentioned is gold my friend
terrfic writting
Lets see more
Hilch :?:
Here is to you as good as you are
And here is to me as bad as I am
As good as you are and as bad as I am
I'm as good as you are as bad as I am
Hi Morkalg
Very good story - straightforward and to the point told realy well. Good imagery and good take onthe assignment.
Sorry about the relationship breakdown.
Bob :wink:
You are what you eat, eat well
