well, i'm rewriting this fairly drastically.
broken glass is in my head
cutting up my thoughts to shreds
memories of those broken nights
promises broken and so many fights
like sirens and lights
on blue and white cars
time heals all wounds
let the sun heal the scars
now i'm alone and all i see
are restless eyes staring back through me
all i hear are the flapping gums
of lonely crowds whose words won't come
just vacant and numb
in a beer and rum bar
time heals all wounds
let the sun heal the scars
well, you can take up shelter to collect your wits
and wait one more day before calling it quits
but there's no wrong but the right
to burn out what was bright
like one tiny light
in an ocean of stars
time heals all wounds
let the sun heal the scars
hey.
I like it :D
first 2 verses kinda remind me of Jonas(great music..band doesn't really exist anymore).
I'm very fond of the references to gums.
nice writing;)
bluenightangel
"oh, eventually it will break your heart" - anders wendin
Hi There
Well to honest this just don't work for me " SORRY " but it seeems to me just to be lyrics that flow together , there is no story to this and I can not understand what you are saying .
sorry
cheers
L.K
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Aghhhh
Not only am I a senior citizen
I'm now a bloody senior member
Are you people trying to tell me I'm old or what ?
over 700 posts ( I really do need to get out more )
yeah i agree with lotto king, i dont reall understand whre it went it was a little bit 'random' is the word
i rewrote it almost completely.
there's a line in a bob dylan song, -not dark yet-, that goes, "i still got the scars that the sun didn't heal."
hey.
as I said I liked it before ... you did a hell of a job rewriting!
and it's wonderful, a more coherent image now instead of patchwork(which I liked, too!). amazing lines...
great how the '4linechoruspart' changes and repeats.
very well done.
bluenightangel
"oh, eventually it will break your heart" - anders wendin
i have to work on setting some of these songs to music.
