Hi everyone. am a complete novice at this so would really appreciate any input anyone could give....
Only Second Best
You stand there looking at me
Waiting for me to speak
But I dont know how to say what i feel
It hurts that you think I dont know
That your longing for something else
Sending out that silent appeal
I dont want to do this again
BRIDGE
I see those little lies
That hide there in your eyes
That lead you without surprise
Down the road
You want to follow
But you know...
CHORUS
You will walk that road alone
With no sign or map to guide you
On that winding road of unknown
But dont come home
Without the love I need you to invest
All the while you think
You've been Stuck with second best.
You stand there speaking at me
Waiting for me to reply
But i dont want to start up a fight
Your contradiction has me confused
And i dont want to hear it
Cos that just wont make it right.
I dont want to do this again
(BRIDGE)
But you Know
(CHORUS)
You were my last chance
You were my leap of faith
Now lost my trust in romance
You said dont tar me with the same brush
But that was all a load of mush
Cos baby, you're just the same
I dont want to do this again
(BRIDGE)
But you know
(CHORUS)
WATER AND FIRE
AKD
Welcome to GuitarNoise. I like your song but think it
would be better off in Guitar Noise Songwriters Club.
In The Sunday Songwriters Group we follow an assignment
that our "Lord and Master" Bob post as a "Sticky" each Sunday.
(This weeks assignment was "All in the Game")
You are always welcome to try an assignment but non-assignment
songs tend to get overlooked. You would get much better response
in the Guitar Noise Songwriters Club and your song deserves that
chance.
Good Writing
John
Yep what John said
Nice song though
Here is to you as good as you are
And here is to me as bad as I am
As good as you are and as bad as I am
I'm as good as you are as bad as I am
Thaks guys will bear that in mind.....
WATER AND FIRE
