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For the better by edd week 45

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Edd Hill ©
After the frog song i thought i better write something slighlty less of the cuff as it where

This song i feel is about me and my gf however we are v.young lol but i feel the song can apply to anyone who is having to make the choice of having a more serious relationship than they have had before in their life i dedicate this song to u em x

Disrupted plans, broken constellations
Re packaged and rehashed
Aint it funny how as humans we want progress
Maybe this time I'll rip the rulebook and transgress

In this world of going forward
Living life by the sword
This time it's touching my heart
Stepping forward would rip me apart

Maybe its time to stop walking forward in any direction
Look I'm fading away I've got an opaque complexion
Its time to make my move and in a reflex action
I broke the sword in two; I did this all for you

It's only a small step in comparable distance
Yet in my mind it's the largest step in existence
I need to know if I cross the line
That I will be forgiven for my past crime

Turning the other way
Keeping your feelings at bay
It's the only way I've known
It's the only side I've shown
You changed me for the better
Changed by a girl from Windsor

You changed me for the better

Turning the other way
Keeping your feelings at bay
It's the only way I've known
It's the only side I've shown
You changed me for the better
I'm no longer an ordinary boy for Hampshire

I stepped into your light from the darkness of my realm
Emotion poured through my heart and I was overwhelmed
Once the gates had been opened by a woman's love
Gilt and sadness were brought in by a white dove
Who's Noah? And what about the animals
Cleansing the bad in a world undone by rules

I guess the search is over and I don't need to step forward anymore
I've found the place where my heads in heaven but feet are on the floor
Hard to describe something you've never been surer of
I made the final move I made the commitment
Yet still so nervous the mountain peak looks so distant

Thanks for bothering to read mine coz there are millions of other peoples out there who are way beter c ya

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Thanks for bothering to read mine coz there are millions of other peoples out there who are way beter c ya

I'm glad i did read it because i like it! I can relate which always helps, but not only that its a good bit of writing IMO

these bits stuck in my mind when i read it
I stepped into your light from the darkness of my realm
Emotion poured through my heart and I was overwhelmed

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I guess the search is over and I don't need to step forward anymore
I've found the place where my heads in heaven but feet are on the floor

they are really good, wish i could come up with lines like those!
good Imagery and feeling.

:D


   
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